174 my wife wave

My wife is a great wave
on a great wave day.
I catch her, cresting, clear, seperate,
a long way out.
Her strength would
pull me under if I hadn’t
felt her coming,
wasn’t moving with her.
Her surge grasps me,
my board pushes into
that crashing creshendo.
She rushes me, laughing.
Down her line, wild, white, wet
and up, up, up
onto cool, soaked sand.
Laying still, quiet,
as foam, salt receeds.
I push up,
wade in.
She waits for me.


About Ken Greenman

Married and Happy. Retired and busy. Living in NC. 71 and counting. December 12, 2020 and it's 72! ... I would love some written comments, critiques, adulation or kind suggestions.... If you have the time and or inclination, please feel free! Not in fear but by faith. We will see. See you later! If you ever want to talk for real, email me and I will send you my cell number.... I am enjoying this!
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